Audience Feedback: Third/Fourth Draft

Once more, I went back to my aunt. She is a recently married 27 year old upper middle class woman. This shows that she would be a part of my target audience and she therefore represents the type of person that I'd need to appeal to. This means that her opinions are particularly valid. She gave some very negative feedback here but this was requested as I wanted to know what I needed to change for the construction of my final product.



Transcript:

- Okay, front cover?
- I like the filter on the front cover. That's a change that I think you should stick with. It suits. I just noticed that you forgot to add the number on the end of the issue on the top strip. So be careful of that. Have you considered adding in a barcode? 
- I could consider that. Here is the contents page? 
- Not much has changed except changing the saturation of the images and changing the editors note. I'm not sure that this was a good change. Move the title of the editors note up a little and see how that looks. I still think you should put a gap between the image of your sister and the image of the suit. 
- I will consider that. And the article, please?
- The article text is all there. First person is good, makes it more personal. So does the informal tone. I also love the filter that you've put on the images. That makes them work even better together so well done there. 
- And the billboard? I've made some changes here. 
- I do not like this billboard layout change at all. It looks awful. I think you need to change it back to how it was and go with that as a final product instead.
- Okay, sorry. And the website?
- This background looks horrific as well. It doesn't match at all. It's overpowering. Take that away and consider adding more articles. That's all I have to say for now really. 
- Right, thank you for the advice 

Once more, I decided to create a graphic to represent this though this is mostly negative feedback.