Contents Page 2nd Draft

This is the second draft for my contents page. 

Since I posted the first draft, I have made a lot of changes. Firstly, I added in the image of the suit. This image matches what I wanted and it works well with the other three images. I lowered the saturation on the images and then applied a creme filter so that they all fit together and work as a cohesive whole. I also filled out the contents list. I made a separate text box for the page numbers and made them larger so that they covered two lines and were the same size as the article title and the article description. I also lowered the leading value so that the numbers were closer together. Additionally, I decided to try separating the content within my contents list with titles to see how it would look and I particularly like it. It makes my contents page look more organised. I feel that the content I put in the contents box reflects that my magazine has a range of content and different articles. I also think that the text I put in my editors note is welcoming and adds a personal touch. Finally, I lowered the brightness of the background so that the white in other sections of the page stood out more and looked more vibrant.

I am proud of the progress that I have made and I will continue to make changes suggested from audience feedback.