Billboard 2nd Draft

Here is the second draft for my billboard: 

I really like this draft. I think it came out particularly well. The additional information does not detract from the page but ensures that some of the empty space is filled at the same time as directing onlookers to where they can learn more about my product. I also raised the saturation and increased the pink tones in the image to make it stand out more visually. The more vibrant colours are more interesting and far stronger. I think that this image is far more dramatic this way and is far more likely to attract and maintain onlookers attention - which is the goal of a billboard.